Writing Market Commentary to be Read

Writing Market Commentary to be Read

We’re fortunate to be currently leading one-on-one interviews with financial advisors on behalf of a long-standing client. We always enjoy these discussions as a good way to vet the execution of strategic sales and marketing plans.

In a conversation yesterday, an advisor and I talked a lot about content, detailing what makes for good and bad commentary. He’s a savvy advisor, serving his clients for over 15 years and had myriad examples starting with “this is great” and “these guys waste my time with…”.

Reflecting on that conversation, I distilled two ideas to share broadly (others stay privy to our client, sorry).

  1. Add bullets to the top of any commentary longer than 3 paragraphs. I noticed as we walked through positive examples the role bullets play in his decision-making process (whether to read or not).
  2. Make sure the graphics and charts belong. He wanted information and data that told something interesting, not  supportive. He thought, numerous times, an author included a chart to prove his opinion. He’s not looking for asset managers to show their work or use backwards-looking data to prove a case.

We find many more asset managers (relative to years’ past) relying on commentary to influence their prospective clients. As they do so, it’s crucial to produce content as client-friendly as possible.